We aren’t butterflies and candy corn to be swept away by a storm. We’re more Feel it in the rain. Feel it in the wind. I’m here for you Don’t you Dare desert me. You’re free to love another But my memories are staked my my heart. I feel the rain, it’s piercing. I feel the wind, I’m falling. I’m here with no shelter waiting for you. When you come, bring and umbrella, ‘kay? |
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Baby three of depression quadruplets. Kinda quirky but I just feel like if you're in this emotional storm, then you should have some shelter. It's what I feel.
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At line nine the poem becomes completely abstract - it talks about the narrator's inner world without really revealing what it is. Unless one is a close friend or mother of the narrator, the reader is lost as to what's going on. Perhaps there could be a way to put in more imagery/metaphors to make the poem more open to others? Put it in context to which others could relate?
"Fell it in the rain." typo or intentional?
Lovely message; cheers for the read!
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